#2
As I listen:

I like the way the strings/pad/whatever comes in with the lead guitar to make it sound fuller.

I like the change around :55, and the way the solo changes with it.

Your leads are good, but it gets boring as the song progresses; if you could find more ways to change it up, it'd be a lot more interesting.

Your percussion's pretty static too; if you had it contribute more to build-ups and changes, that could help quite a bit.

C4C? Links are in my sig.