#3
There's a lot good about this, but I'm sure you've heard it all already. So here's some things that could be improved: that flow could use some work, and both of their voices sounded weak. The instrumentation behind them was really generic and basically the sounds everybody is using today.

Try to be more outside the box. The lyrics were about the stuff we've been hearing for years, and the video was the same sort of money throwing, booty shaking stuff we've all seen a million times before. Everything seemed really professional though, so good job. Maybe get a better camera man.
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