#2
Hey, nice little recordings. You seem to suffer a little from what I suffer which is noodling without much punch. There are times where you waver out of time a bit. Practice playing along to drum tracks to pin down and clean your strumming up, It will make you emphasize certain beats and will sharpen your rhythm playing up.
I have been doing that of late and it has really improved my rhythm from my recordings six months ago.
Otherwise your chords and songs are nice I can tell you listen to zepp a bit.