I can't really critique the music, because the vocals take up too much room. I can hardly tell there's one guitar, much less two. Your singer's pretty good; I can't tell what she's saying most of the time, but that could be as much or more the room or PA system's fault than hers.

From what I can tell, the band's pretty tight; just up the guitars in the mix.

C4C? Links are in my sig.