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So... yeah, been a while since i posted in these parts. Been experimenting a little with vocal melody and came up with a little tune just yesterday.

Now, i know that my singing really sucks and some notes are just all over the place, but yeah.. feel free to critize the lyrics!


All the people in this world
Shifting planes, but not on phone
Telling places i dont know
I dont know where its going but i guess i call it home

o-o-oohh-waoohh
guess i call it home

Using leaves to talk to strangers
Planting trees to save the world
Ive thrown so many seeds away that i dont know if it'll come to me
but im sure it will

sometime
Ill see your face
somehow
between my hands
And reach out, but in vain, to grasp the brilliant color of this space
Time and time, through again
i'd like to be your friend

o-o-oohh-oohh
I'd like to be your friend

All the people in this world
Trading smiles, but no one knows
That behind those closed eyes, a long year of hunger lies
Yes, I see what you see but i'll only see once

-melodi-

All the people in this world
Throwing rocks, but not their homes
And when glass shatters all we do, is blame some other poor fool
regretting but not telling, talking is all we do

sometime
Ill see your face
somehow
between my hands
And reach out, but in vain, to grasp the brilliant color of this space
Time and time, through again
i'd like to be your friend


https://soundcloud.com/pojke20/glass

Glass means ice cream in Swedish. ;D You wont believe how many retakes i did to record that..
Last edited by Petolvan at Apr 20, 2014,