#1
Your whole life
You've been swimming
In such a shallow sea
Your whole life
You've refused to
Look far underneath

Look beyond the surface
Deep into the ocean
Far below the waves
Deep into the trenches
Where there's so much more
That the eye can't see

Diving down
You will see now
More than you've ever known
Diving down
Revealing so much more
When you look below

Look beyond the surface
Deep into the ocean
Far below the waves
Deep into the trenches
Where there's so much more
That the eye can't see

The surface is filed
With corals so vain
Beautiful
As they are
There's not much of a brain

Your whole life
You've been swimming
In such a shallow sea
Your whole life
You've refused to
Look far underneath
#2
I would like to say that the topic (people not realizing the deeper parts of life) is one I don't think has been done before. Very clever style, wordplay and delivery!
#4
Feel free to check out my stuff. Lots of metaphors and nonsense words. There's probably a deeper meaning.