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Greendaz,
Intro high guitar notes are ear-piercing for me (but I'm sensitive to that). If there is electric bass, I don't hear it well. Good you have vocals (most people don't). They are not ultra melodic, and sometimes a bit pitchy, but that's not unusual for punk. Sounds pretty good for the style. Guitar riffs are appropriate for punk. Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1641229