Pretty awesome Song you did there, mate ;D I would just suggest to hold the notes of the vocals in the chorus a bit longer. Like vocoderboy already said, its a bit abrupt. But cool song though ;D
Interesting rhythm guitar tone, kind of a lo-fi, big muff-esque sound. I like the lead riff in the intro.

I think the chorus would be stronger if you had some backing tracks holding out the words and doing counterpoint (look at the later choruses of Otherside by RHCP to see what I mean).

Great bass tone; I think it could use just a tad more treble, but otherwise, it sounds great, it's really fun.

Overall, I think it's a cool, catchy song.

C4C? Links are in my sig.