#2
I really liked this song a lot. The vocals sounded excellent (both the quality of recording and pitch/tone). The viola parts were really nice and enhanced the song quite a bit.

One thing I think I'd work on is trying to add a little more low end to the guitar, as it sounded a little flat mixed against the lush sound of the singer's voice.

Side note: I think that the guitar picking pattern in the intro is maybe a bit too similar to your other track The Beginning of the End

I'd appreciate it if you listened to my track and left feedback

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1642130

Cheers
Last edited by dead_air_space at May 4, 2014,
#3
Toasted,
The singing is good, though somehow the vocals sound a bit muffled or conflicting EQ-wise with the instrumental portion (more towards the beginning). I would make small adjustments to the vocal EQ and see what happens (though dead_air_space seems to disagree with me on that count). Guitar playing & melodies are fine. Strings sound nice. Nice song. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1641229
#4
Quote by aaron aardvark
Toasted,
The singing is good, though somehow the vocals sound a bit muffled or conflicting EQ-wise with the instrumental portion (more towards the beginning). I would make small adjustments to the vocal EQ and see what happens (though dead_air_space seems to disagree with me on that count). Guitar playing & melodies are fine. Strings sound nice. Nice song. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1641229



Now that you mention it I can see how the vocals sound a little muffled. I wasn't sure at first if it was just how she was singing or an EQ thing. In retrospect I would suggest maybe trying to tweak the EQ on the vocals for them to pop out a little more.