#3
A little too much repetitive, and then comes 0:30, the song just gets awful. That weird instrument, and then that crazy guitar run and... blast beats??? If it's not metal don't bother using blast beats, even in metal they can be annoying and awful. Sorry, but all I see in your song is a potential intro you have with those arpeggios, which were nice (just don't repeat them over and over, it's annoying)