#1
So I've come to a pass. I, myself, can not do the vocals for the main parts of the song. I just cant figure out how to do it and make it sound good. I can do the slower parts no problem, though. So if any of you out there want to give it a shot, you are more than welcome to! Anyhow, here's the song:

https://soundcloud.com/earthbound015/metal-song

Give it a listen, let me know what you think and throw some advice my way!
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#2
DUDE!!! THIS is some slamming stuff here! Intro reminds me of pantera!!!! Super awesome!!!!!!!!!! Dude, all the way through, this was just great!!!! What kind vocals would u try to put on this, if u do something like anselmo would do, this would be incredible! So pantera like, its like hearing a new pantera song! (To me thats a GREAT THING too) keep it up!
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https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=32635157
#4
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Very nice, I enjoy all of your vocal stuff quite a bit! I would love to see what you could do for this track, m'friend.
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If star wars had a Heavy Metal band (no not "Vader" lol), then you would be it. You sound like a anrgy mother****ing Yoda.


I sound like an angry Yoda...is that a good thing...or a bad thing? lol
#5
Well are you still working on the song? It sounds incomplete like it needs some stuff. To me, it seems like it lacks a part that really sounds like a chorus
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#6
Good and heavy. That's always a good thing. Gives me an Exhorder type of feel - it's really raw. I think the drums are maybe a bit bright? Well just the cymbals at least. (To be honest though, I can never get drums to sound right so... I know it's a challenge). Did you record a bass guitar as well or is this just drums n guitar? the riff 33 seconds in is nice and tasty. Super f'n groovey man. How did you record the guitars? Mic up the amp and track it twice?
#7
Thanks for the good words, guys. I can see what I can do to add a more chorus-y sounding chorus somewhere in there! Any advice would be welcome, of course.

powerhead, the bass is from a vst I have. I don't have a bass anymore, so yeah. I use FL Studio for all my recording stuff and use Amplitube for my amp/pedal needs. It comes with an effect to change a guitar into a bass, but I don't think it sounds very good, hah.
Quote by mangablade
If star wars had a Heavy Metal band (no not "Vader" lol), then you would be it. You sound like a anrgy mother****ing Yoda.


I sound like an angry Yoda...is that a good thing...or a bad thing? lol