#1
I've been trying to craft a sound for an EP and I've came to really like this style of guitar playing.

https://soundcloud.com/kyleganger/swag-terrible-mix
https://soundcloud.com/kyleganger/twang-and-drum-test

I'd love to know what people think of my keyboard drums and guitar.
Thanks in advance, Kyle
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#2
Critting SWAG:

Nice soundscape at the beginning, I especially like the piano/keyboard tone.

The part starting at 1:08 sounds pretty empty in comparison to the parts that led up to it; I'd maybe trying using some synths to get a fuller sound.

I don't really think the blast beats fit during the ending section.

I think the first minute or so was good; I think the shred sections could be better, but either way, it's a cool song. =)


Critting Twang and Drum Test:

The intro is great, but it's be a lot stronger with bass (or a guitar an octave down if you don't have bass available to you).

Love the section starting at 0:46. =)

I like this; however, it sounds a lot weaker than it should due to the lack of bass.

C4C? Links are in my sig.
#3
Hey, the vibe from SWAG is really chilling, I'd just flow with the rhythm though at the ending guitar, it just kills the atmosphere a little.
Other than that I enjoyed it a lot, mostly the low whammy riffs around 1:00

C4C? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1643890
#5
Quote by herby190
Critting SWAG:

Nice soundscape at the beginning, I especially like the piano/keyboard tone.

The part starting at 1:08 sounds pretty empty in comparison to the parts that led up to it; I'd maybe trying using some synths to get a fuller sound.

I don't really think the blast beats fit during the ending section.

I think the first minute or so was good; I think the shred sections could be better, but either way, it's a cool song. =)


Critting Twang and Drum Test:

The intro is great, but it's be a lot stronger with bass (or a guitar an octave down if you don't have bass available to you).

Love the section starting at 0:46. =)

I like this; however, it sounds a lot weaker than it should due to the lack of bass.

C4C? Links are in my sig.

Thanks for taking time to listen to my track.
I've always enjoyed a really moody piano.
I think the part at 1:03 sounded empty because I switch to just a mono guitar. The parts before it are 4 panned guitars so that is probably why it sound empty and the tone sounds like balls.

I am trying to get used to writing drums so it didn't come out too fitting. I am not really sure where to take the song percussion wise.


Same goes for bass and the Twang track. I'm new to writing these parts so I just got lazy and left it out.


Thank you again for taking the time to critique my tracks.
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Recording gear:
Yahama Hs8
Saffire Pro 40
Shure Sm57
Shure Sm7b

Guitar gear :
Ebmm BFR7
Axe fx XL+
Walrus audio Janus
Ibanez Ergodyne
Black Market Custom cab