I liked it, I'm still learning so I cant really critique it but I dug it.

The part at 1:07 was sick.
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Love the guitar tone in the intro. I think the sidestick is a bit loud, it's kind of annoying.

I think you could come up for a better drum part for the section starting at 1:28; maybe try having the drums build. The part that section builds into is awesome. =) Very full, and great melodies.

The bridge/solo section at 2:43 is great as well. I'd maybe add on some held out guitar notes or a different melody around 3:07 to keep it interesting, though.

All in all, very well done. =)

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