This was well played and sung man! Your timing and groove is right on and your singing is all there with no problem. Swelling from a lower to louder volume to build up at points - basically giving dynamics are the key to making acoustic tunes really stand out. This was good though! Some better recording equip would do wonders as well. Keep it up man, you def are playing your heart out and you sound great.

C4C? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1645112