Hey man, this was pretty cool. My main concern was that the lead tone was very damp with too much delay and the volume was lower than the clean tone so it was a little harder to pay attention to.

As far as the playing goes its all there. Your timing was good and phrasing was appropriate. I'd just swtich up your tone and mix between the lead and rhythm and it would pop a LOT more in my opinion. Overall, good job !

C4C ? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1645112