I have been trying to record some of my own creations and here's one I finally got round to doing. I improvised some of the chorus-heavy riffs and came up with the palm-muted main riff by randomly humming in the bath and working it out. What are your opinions?

Also, I know you can't judge from one song but do you think I have any potential in music


You're problem is looking for approval to justify your music. Just write stuff that you enjoy.
Also, your age is really irrelevant.
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Recording gear:
Yahama Hs8
Saffire Pro 40
Shure Sm57
Shure Sm7b

Guitar gear :
Ebmm BFR7
Axe fx XL+
Walrus audio Janus
Ibanez Ergodyne
Black Market Custom cab
17YO is my "stage name". I called myself that because my name is boring and I started to learn guitar when I was 17.