#2
Quote by 1111belphegor
Hi,

Here is something I put together yesterday.
A bit of thrash, death, doom and whatnot.

Let me know what you think - will return the favor of course!

The Waking Hours


That's pretty cool! It has the deathcore vibe during the halftime/breakdown style parts, but the main verses and lyrics are pretty traditional death metal. Great jam! Here's my piece. Maybe you can give me some feedback?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rybcqrmZmek
#4
Nice track man. The guitars are nice and fat and evil sounding - as are the vocals.

The solo confused me - it sounds a little cheesey but in a strange way that actually made it all the more satisfying to listen to. Either way it leads into the end section well and doesnt sound bad.

I would say that, on the headphones I was using, the cymbals were a little too aggressive - too much high end - it made it a little savage on the ears.

Other than that it sounded damn good.

If you fancy checking my efforts out my latest track is here - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1644870

Cheers
#5
Thanks man, will totally check your stuff out. I know what you are saying about the solo, I put some chorus and delay on it and double tracked it. Made it sound almost like a cheap keyboard. Not sure about it at all. Again, many thanks.
#6
Sick! Did you do all the instruments and vocals? If so, your vocals are good dude! Guitar playing is tight and heavy, I like it!

The solo sounds good in the song and really makes a nice transition between the heavier part and the more melodic part of the song.

Check my Soundcloud here if you want to, I've got a lot of thrash and death metal on it :-)
#7
@\m/TheWickerMan,
Many thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! Especially happy for the comment on my vocals as I am just learning….

Will definitely check your work out!

Stay black, stay metal!