Join date: Jan 2011
10 IQ
Oh man that last line.

This feels like part of something bigger though, almost an aside from another piece.

Hang on in there, things will get better.
Bleed Away
Join date: Feb 2006
70 IQ
Thanks! Yeah, I agree as well. It was originally meant to be the opening lines to a poem that I wanted to write but, I think it, could very well work as a closer to a poem. I felt very strongly about these three lines, so I used them as a stand-alone. I will most likely come back to this and expand.