Hi guys, so yeah im no singer ill shred a bass and play soothing guitar lines but when it comes to singing I shut down...so here I am working on that. I've had this piece for a while now and for a week now just been working on a melody and singing it while I play. It's just one sentence of lyrics, but I can always add in some other lines...the important for me is that I don't sound half bad....give me some critique pls and ty (c4c?)

The vocal track is kind of buried heavily behind the guitar; likely because you're probably a little self conscious about your singing?

It sounds on key but it's hard to tell because of how quiet the vocal track is.