#1
some one I know likes to create electronic music, and he feels that something is missing. what do you think? https://soundcloud.com/daxdan/no-idea
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#4
first things first, a kick that doesn't sound like someone plugging headphones in
i don't know why i feel so dry
#10
Class.
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#11
Instruments.
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#12
anyone have any serious feedback besides eastwinn?
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This thread topic is gold. I've been on this website for 8 years and I've never come up with anything like this. So yeah. Great job TS[457undead].
#13
Post it in the Electronic music thread, or one the recording sub forums if you want a proper answer.

EDIT: Although I was quite serious in what I said.
Last edited by Malchius at Jun 16, 2014,
#14
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anyone have any serious feedback besides eastwinn?

Needs more guitar feedback.
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#15
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Anything interesting.


This, your friends music is boring. Descent for beginners work I guess. I couldn't make anything better.

Also needs heavier bass
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#16
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anyone have any serious feedback besides eastwinn?

I was being serious, maybe he can make it not suck

He's no miracle worker tho :lime:
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#17
Literally everything about it needs to be improved. The sounds he was using for the different instruments were all just awful, and the actual music itself was boring.
#19
a guest breakdown from RylanThePotato
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#20
It sounds like someone doodling around on that shitty lead saw effect from a 20 year old Casio keyboard

And there are no wubs
#21
The beat was boring, the drum kit samples were awful, the synths all sounded bad. There was no dynamic range to anything.

But the real problem is that it sounded like he was writing music for a 3 piece punk band.
#22


Yeah, my browser has a "Shitty Music Block" app.

There's an app for that, didn't you know!!??
#23
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The beat was boring, the drum kit samples were awful, the synths all sounded bad. There was no dynamic range to anything.

But the real problem is that it sounded like he was writing music for a 3 piece punk band.


actually all of this.
i don't know why i feel so dry
#27
The mix is awful, the kick is drowned out, that synth is far too forward in the mix, the whole things needs more depth, frequencies are clashing, the structure is... off-putting, everything needs to be layered... I could go on.