Hey man! Love Dismember myself and this is a true death metal classic

I think it would do you a lot of good to work on your tremolo picking with a metronome so its always consistent. Your left hand is doing a good job though. A few minor timing issues as well, but its definitely getting pretty close. Keep it up dude!

C4C? - https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=32761887#post32761887