Hey man - that sounded really cool! Kinda mastodon like at bits. The background noise thing that comes in at about 50 seconds could maybe be a bit quieter. I'd also say it maybe goes on a bit too long until it gets to the slower/quieter bit but that just might be my short attention span. Also not sure how the bit at around 5.50 fits with the rest of the song, but I'd maybe have to listen to the whole thing a few times to see how it fits.

They're pretty minor things though, overall I loved it.

I've got some stuff here https://soundcloud.com/iliketomaketunes/kldp if you wanna review someone else's stuff (totally different type of stuff though)

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