#2
Chris,
Beginning is abrupt. This reminds me of Morrissey/The Smiths (a compliment). The reverb gives it somewhat of a live feel: I like it, though many of the lyrics are hard to make out (I have the same problem with delay). Everyone is playing & singing well, nice melodies. Nice song! Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1647802