Hey there!

I've been killing time recently by writing a few chords on guitarpro and it turned into 50 bars. Have a look and tell me what you thin about that, suggestions are welcome.

I think personally that the lead at the end sounds a bit unpolish and messy. I'll work on that.

ps: if you want me to crit back your song, just post your link in the response, thank you.
Maybe you already know, but the vocal melody should be much more dynamic. Bars 32-33 I changed the notes to 7-5-5-3 and then a held whole note of 2 for all of bar 33.