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Just been on a dorian binge is all, writing this is actually a real joy.

Still a WIP, but give a crit and so on.
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sunnychug.zip
sunnychug.gp5
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#2
@EpiExplorer: Hey man, this is really good and I can tell it would have been fun writing it.

Anyway, the intro is really hypnotic, the delay (I'm assuming it will be that if recorded) acts like a call-and-response which is really cool. BTW, I know you said it's Dorian but you there's a (modified) VI-IV-V between (and inclusive of) bars 21-24. Not bad thing though, I love that chord progression. I really like the harmonies in the riff at bars 44-51. Not to say the harmonies afterwards are bad, in fact I wished you continued with the ideas from bars 52-61 going for a bit longer (at least). In fact, bars 62-69 would sound better (IMO) if you used replaced it's current progression with the one in 52-61. After that, you could then use the chilled out interlude you have and then have a big finish with the last section you had (fancy guitar solos, drum fills/solo).

So my only gripes were with the structure of the last half really, I can't fault the individual ideas and I actually think that intermixing generic and not-so-generic chord progressions like you've done here is more effective than either extreme. I look forward to you finishing it.

I'll put up a couple of short tracks soon (I have some cool ideas laying around) since I have a break for a few weeks now. I'll come back here and give you the link when the time comes or maybe PM you. Let me know what suits.
#3
Wow wtf that was dope.

Bar 70 is pretty nek level.

Do you play in a band?

Bar 94 was pretty ****ing gross too. In a good way
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