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Here is something I wrote a while back. Its inspired by an Asteroid song (Flowers and Stones).

We follow the line in the sand
It leads us to the sea
Where we descend among the waves
Like we were never meant to be

Disciples crumble from above
Prepared to meet the ground below
Can you grow your wings now
From everything you know

Dark descends to take the sky
We no longer see as one

Thread our lives together
Piece by piece they grow
Fed by fire and faint of heart
Release the unknown

Flowers and stones collide
Like asteroids in the sky
Who knows who can win this war
Of bloated egos and fecund pride

Dark descends to take the sky
We no longer see as one

Crit for crit if you're interested....

KROCK