#1
hey guys,

just finished working on this today. pretty happy with how it turned out, although I know I'm awful at EQ haha. please give it a listen and let me know what you think. I'd love to critique your work as well.

https://soundcloud.com/raylol-1/neato

cheers
#2
The progression is catchy! THe bassline also adds a ton of depth especially towards the middle of the song where it gets a bit more ambient and chill. But seriously, nice job on the basslines. I feel like around 2:30 it should have some funk chords thrown in to add a bit more to the mix, but I like the chords you eventually do throw in. Groovy song dude, I think you've earned yourself a follower and a like! Check out my soundcloud! :P
https://soundcloud.com/owen-griffin-1/apathetic-arcade
Last edited by owen556 at Jul 17, 2014,
#3
First of all. The guitar paying is very tight, well done! The mix is very is very clean sounding as well, everything blends in together nicely. I really don't have anything bad to say about this, it all sounds very clean and well done to my ears.
If you think this is awful EQing I'd love to hear what good EQing sounds like lols.

Get a band together and start playing shows mate. This is good stuff!
#4
Your EQ'ing is pretty good man!

As a bassist, I am loving that phrasing of the second riff, the progression is excellent.

Your playing is very tight as well! Love the part at 3:15

Top notch song, It's insipiring me to up my game haha.

If you want to have a lol at one of my songs have a wee look at this link!

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=32821028#post32821028