What do you think to my 1st song writing attempt & recording? Using Reaper with my PR

This is my first try but I am reasonable happy considering my lack of experience. However I hope for better results next time. Any suggestions and comments are very welcome. Also featured is a slideshow of the above mentioned guitar. Please dont be too harsh on me. This is my first attempt and I have to say... I love this guitar!

Hey, wrong section. Post in the Original Recordings subforum for feedback, etc on original material.
Let's party.