#1
This is my first try but I am reasonable happy considering my lack of experience. However I hope for better results next time. Any suggestions and comments are very welcome. Also featured is a slideshow of the above mentioned guitar. Please dont be too harsh on me. This is my first attempt and I have to say... I love this guitar!


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vn7BpOi_P4E
#2
This is really amazing for a first attempt. The mix sounds nice and clear and I like the compostion; it builds nicely. The only thing I would say is that the guitar sounds a little out of tune at around 01:34. May want to record that again.
#3
This song has a great trippy vibe, has a sweet blend of jazz, power balled, and a hazy psychedelic jam. You mite wanna think about adding lyrics or not because this type of song could easily be a love son of sorts. As far as sound goes overall your quality and tone is really good, the drums are nice to especially at the ending where everything is winding down. If this is really your first attempt then I sincerely look foreward to hearing more from you!

C4C please?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1650401
#4
Thanks ever so much
I don't think the guitar is out of tune. Its my bad string bending.

Yes it is definitely my first try https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1648320

I thought I would just have a play around with a couple of ideas I had, just to get a feel for the programs and I got carried away. I must admit there were a couple of happy accidents and some youtube tutorial viewing to help get a feel.

Hopefully this is a sign of good things to come but I am having a lot more trouble with my second try. Im even tempted to abandon it and start number 3.

I will tale a look at that link when I am home tonight on my home pc. What is meant by C4C?
#7
Meteriot,
C4C means "critique for critique" (he is asking for you to return the favor). Rhythm guitars sound nice. Lead guitar is a bit ear-piercing for me, but I'm sensitive to that. You might experiment with panning different guitar tracks in different spots (very often rhythm guitar tracks are panned left & right). Guitar playing is good overall. Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1650867
#8
Thanks. I will certainly return the favor. I dont feel qualified but i will give it a go

When you say ear piercing do you mean the tone or my playing? LOL
I cringe a tiny bit in places where other people havent noticed anything wrong but I have heard it about 100 times too

I have doubled every track and panned them equally in opposite directions. Do you mean having more on one side than the other?

Cheers
Richard
Last edited by Meteoriot at Jul 30, 2014,
#9
I notice alot of people are using soundcloud. Is that the way to go? I am running out of pictures for slideshows