#1
Verse 1 (the first part of this song is super chill)
Cape Canaveral
Before dawn.
A three-stage 29-50 ton polypheme
Slumbers on

Bridge (no lyrics for this yet)

Verse 2
The modern day argonauts
Lay back in the ship, thinking their own thoughts.
T-minus ten,
And now it all depends on...
[sample of a countdown while instruments go crazy with feedback and stuff]

Chorus (here the song goes hard with fuzz and shit)
All systems go
For the land of ghost-grey snow
Approach an asymptote
Of Absolute Zero

We're gone full steam
Ahead for Kepler's Dream
A state of mind of
Inverse-square gravity

[Hella long jam, maybe have another verse in here and repeat the chorus a couple times? Depends on where the jam goes]

Second Chorus (I guess that's what you call it? Anyway this part is repeated for days)
Ohhh let's go
Ganymede or Io

[Any suggestions on 3 syllable words to use other than "polypheme" to mean "beast" or "giant"? I was using "edifice" but edifices don't really slumber. Also just looking for criticism and comments in general]
Last edited by Clayh at Jul 30, 2014,
#2
Titanis?
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#3
Quote by EMarkM
Titanis?

Apollo 11
Well the beginning is about that at least. I'm loose with it, the rest of the song is just about space in general.
#4
No; I meant your three syllable word meaning big beasty - just a suggestion
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Boss TU-3, NS-2, CS-3, OD-3, CE-5
Ibanez DL10
Fender Blues Junior III
Delta Blue 5 string resonator banjo
Aria Pro II Passive P-J Bass
Aria Pro II Active Music Man Bass
Laney BC-120 Bass Combo
#6
I haven't seen a song about this. It's pretty cool.
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