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You're definitely on the right track. You've got riffs, melodies, some nice little harmonies. The playing could be a little tighter in regards to rhythm though, but that just takes practice. The guitar tone is very good. I noticed that each drum beat is pretty much a one bar loop. If that's what you're working with, then that's fine, but it's totally worth it to invest in quality drum software if you're gonna record your own stuff. I listened to the stuff on your profile page, and those sound pretty good as well. Keep practicing and recording, and you'll be amazed at how your songs will come alive.

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