It's an OK song dude, but seriously, I can't stand comments like "I don't think it's that good"
I think you did very good on the recording side. your guitar sounds great, it just seems to have a lot of pauses.

Surely you must have thought it was good enough to record...? Seems to me like you are saying it just so you get some better positive responses. I'm not trying to be a dick but it's just the way it feels to me.

Also this is in the wrong forum as it should be in the recording forum (specificly in originals)
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