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Hello and thanks for taking the time to read this.

I have recently started songwriting and would really like some feedback on what I have done so far if anyone would be so kind!?

I have a few recordings on soundcloud (if you search for "adam yeomans" I am listed as "AY?!") that are pretty much all I have got around to doing.

I realise there are missed notes and that my vocals may not be to everyones liking but Im more interested on comments on structure and use of words if they are available.

Anything harsh is also fine is you do feel the need. I have only shown this to a few friends so far who think that its lyrically good, but friends are notorious for sugar coating so being exposed to the harsh light of strangers would not be a bad thing!

Thank you again for reading and hope to hear from you soon.

P.s PMs are also checked if you would rather send anything there instead.

All the best
Adam