#1
almost one hundred
thousand on
the odometer
and i still haven't
seen a thing;

i am sorry
for more than distance
can cover

and you -
with midnight at your back,
smiling sleepily
at something
that is far beyond me
somehow still on the run
as i am
eating apples from your eyes
and pushing 101.
#3
Real good stuff, fantastically clean in terms of language and image.

The "cover" rhyme feels a bit stumbley though: I think the line break makes it a tad late, even for the syncopated sonics you've used in this (maybe it is intentional?).
#4
Good one! I like the way you used to decribe that you are searching for something for a far distance and you have not seen anything. The style of writing was good.
#5
Yes as of heatherpatton said the lyrics are really outstanding and it is upto the mark with your best way of description and also the words used by you.
#6
I appreciate for your creative thinking. If you develop the lyrics little more then it is amazing. Just try it, you can improve a lot.