#3
Your guitar tone is too harsh. Try removing some of the high end, maybe remove some of the treble in your amp.
You could make your snare a little brighter. Cymbals are a little bit too loud for my taste.

Composition-wise it's really nice. The synths fit in perfectly. Guitar and drums are rather simple but very well executed and composed.
I think this song really needs some vocals, due to it being very simple and repetitive.

Keep up the good work!

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1651952
#4
I really enjoy the sound. I like the harshness of the tone, I think it works well for what it is. I do wish I could hear the kick a bit more and the cymbals a bit less, though. If you don't mind the vocals being growl-y and scream-y all the way through, I'd love to see what I could do vocally on this.

A sample of my vocals:

https://soundcloud.com/earthbound015/from-rags-to-ruin-remaster
Quote by mangablade
If star wars had a Heavy Metal band (no not "Vader" lol), then you would be it. You sound like a anrgy mother****ing Yoda.


I sound like an angry Yoda...is that a good thing...or a bad thing? lol
#5
Quote by mp8andrade
Your guitar tone is too harsh. Try removing some of the high end, maybe remove some of the treble in your amp.
You could make your snare a little brighter. Cymbals are a little bit too loud for my taste.

Composition-wise it's really nice. The synths fit in perfectly. Guitar and drums are rather simple but very well executed and composed.
I think this song really needs some vocals, due to it being very simple and repetitive.

Keep up the good work!

C4C?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1651952


Thanks for the crit. I'm still working on mastering. I don't have a drummer, so I'm putting samples together in a sequencer, I can't EQ drums for shit.

There's no synth in the track, it's all guitar.
#6
pcp g,
Sounds good & heavy (a compliment). I agree some good vocals would help. Sometimes the cymbals sound a bit odd to me, otherwise the drums are good. Bass & synth (oh, it's not synth, but sounds like it) is fine. The strong point is the guitar riffs (good!). Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=32914918#post32914918