#1
Hey what's up everyone

Been a long time since I posted a song. I've got a couple of tunes with my band Dr. Professional that I would for which I would appreciate some criticism. Will crit your songs for mine, just give a link!

This tune is about running out of cash and being forced to have a garage sale to afford the all important coffee and pizza. You know what I mean.

The drummer wrote the song and lyrics, I play lead guitar and sing vocals. Please let me know what you think of the song and the mix as this hasn't been finalized.

THANKS!

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/Jimmy94/music/play1276291
#3
Nice! That had some chili peppers/primus vibes going on. The vocals sounded pretty solid and I liked the mix. I feel like if you added more dynamics in there it would really bring it together though. Good Work!