#1
who are the ones
who are they?
but why?
you see this?
you see it all happening?
can you not?
why?

obvious?
is it not real?
is this not what to think?
i used ketchup and now i blink.
but only from this,
I'm in disbelief....and i can't even think.
why?

is it too early?
is it too late?
who believes in miracles?
and disbelief bare icing with no cake
........filled with leaves and a 3 sided rake.

so whats going on and on?
why?
can this even begin to be me?
and through in-vision
fragile unbroken belief
speaking please believe.
please keep.
i just don't get.....
why?
.
Last edited by ILoveGuitar07 at Aug 24, 2014,
#5
I think it is nicely written for the usually used word "why".
It can be written for different concept. But you used it in really a different way. Good one