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Swason,
A person could argue that you could project your voice more, but somehow it works in this particular song, I think (though I would not sing like this in every song you do, if possible). Kind of reminds me of Nirvana's song 'Polly' (good). Guitar chords & playing are good. Perhaps you could review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1654110