#2
HEy for hard rock the riffs are pretty cool, even though I feel like I may have heard them before. The tone is a bit generic but if anything distinctly sounds metal. The lead part by the end sounds sick as well as the chords at the end, and the last two strikes sound good...Production sounds good, now make this a full length song dammit. :P
#3
Thanks! To be honest i just made some riffs in the moment haha I just wanted to do something heavy so they're generic riffs in a way, nothing complex.
I'll definetly continue this song this week and probably finish it in the weekend so just wait a week!
If you liked those leads at the end maybe you'll like my other song. Its full of those kinda licks and fills
https://soundcloud.com/isa-cw/el-arsonista-20
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1653623
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#4
Damn I really like this. The string/synth part is really good, really adds the extra depth to the song. Excellent guitar playing, everything is very tight. Interesting chords you have towards the end, really nice little lead licks in there too. This really has a lot of potential to be a great song!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1655090
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#5
I don't really listen to Djent, but I loved this! I don't even know how to put it in words. The layers and harmonies worked much better than most modern metal I've heard in a long time. And the last ten seconds had a beautiful jazz-esque feeling, and I really liked it. Please notify us if you make this a whole song great stuff
#6
You know that riff at 0:50 is very alike your other song, El Arsonista. Be careful, you don't want to rip off your own stuff

It will make a really awesome song. I'll wait until it's complete to give better feedback.

Keep it up man!
#8
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Damn I really like this. The string/synth part is really good, really adds the extra depth to the song. Excellent guitar playing, everything is very tight. Interesting chords you have towards the end, really nice little lead licks in there too. This really has a lot of potential to be a great song!

Crit mine? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1655090


Thanks! Theres no string in the song tho. Just a minor synth at the the :12 second mank to the :22 mark (:
I like that chord so much! haha its like my signature chord
-5
-6
-5
-8
-5
-5
Its like an ellaborate power chord in drup tunning but with that extra note at the b string makes it sound a bit minor-ish
#9
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I don't really listen to Djent, but I loved this! I don't even know how to put it in words. The layers and harmonies worked much better than most modern metal I've heard in a long time. And the last ten seconds had a beautiful jazz-esque feeling, and I really liked it. Please notify us if you make this a whole song great stuff


Thanks you for the nice words! Really? I thought it was a bit repetiteve haha
And yeah, i posted the chord one comment up and i use it too in jazz recordings
I'll let you guys now when i finish this!
#10
Quote by mp8andrade
You know that riff at 0:50 is very alike your other song, El Arsonista. Be careful, you don't want to rip off your own stuff

It will make a really awesome song. I'll wait until it's complete to give better feedback.

Keep it up man!


I just like that kind of melody! And that kind of lick is my go to move xd

Thanks! I'll work on this piece this week, lets see where this idea takes me.
#12
What do you guys think about having someone do some screaming in this?
Like some Meshuggah kind of screams with cleans vocals as the chorus