#1
So I finished up a good chunk of a full length I've been working on for 2 months and was trying to get a critique.

Does the organ or bass need to be bumped up in the mix?

Is the vocal delivery okay?

Should I have waited till I could take a trip up to the label I co-founded and use the good equipment?

How is it overall?

etc.

https://thepyramidions.bandcamp.com/releases