#1
Haven't written a thing in 2 years, wrote this in an hour-ish. Tell me what you think so far.

Taking every punch
Taking every blow
Taking every hit
And I don't feel a thing

Tossed back and forth
By planets and stars alike
It's the universe's favorite game
A keep away with me

I built these walls
But I built them too tall
When in a closed room, the first thing man wants
Is a window

Show me how to live again
I can't recall
Show me what it's like to love again
Before I fall
Again
Before I fall again

Every possible outcome
Every possible end
Anything that could happen
Always leaves me dead

Tossed back and forth
By Life and death the same
It's another petty little game
With me as the ball

I built these walls
But I built them too tall
When in a closed room, the first thing man wants
Is a window

Show me how to live again
I can't recall
Show me what it's like to love again
Before I fall
Again
Before I fall again
Last edited by gateway01 at Sep 8, 2014,
#2
It is one of the ever best song which I have ever read especially the feelings of a person when working in a closed room is expressed superbly and also the usage of words in rhyming is very nice as it gives the users a nice piece of thinking and good piece of work. I amm waiting for some more songs like this from you.