#1
it just can't happen this way
guess they were glad to see me go
wish i would have said
I'll miss them the most

you all were unique
and have your strengths
wish i would have showed it more
and gone to great lengths

you're like a unit
and maybe i just blew it
i want to be wanted
but in the end i knew it

i wish it wasn't true
the things people do
reaching for true bliss
buts its true,
its you I'll truly miss
.
Last edited by ILoveGuitar07 at Sep 12, 2014,
#2
Ending line is not having a good flow. Just stuck with the lines. Try to improve it, if you think that you are done a good ending then it is fine. This is just my suggestion to edit.