it just can't happen this way
guess they were glad to see me go
wish i would have said
I'll miss them the most

you all were unique
and have your strengths
wish i would have showed it more
and gone to great lengths

you're like a unit
and maybe i just blew it
i want to be wanted
but in the end i knew it

i wish it wasn't true
the things people do
reaching for true bliss
buts its true,
its you I'll truly miss
Last edited by ILoveGuitar07 at Sep 12, 2014,
Ending line is not having a good flow. Just stuck with the lines. Try to improve it, if you think that you are done a good ending then it is fine. This is just my suggestion to edit.