First off, it's a cool song, and the quality is really sharp, although I think the guitars could be slightly louder. The vocals in the verse are pretty solid. It's not totally unintelligable, and it has a nice robotic edge to it.

The chorus vocals however, made me cringe a little bit. I don't mean to be blunt, but I think they would sound much better without whatever effect (autotune maybe?) you used, and maybe without the harmony. The effect made the vocals waver in and out a little, and instead of making them shine, it just made them sound far away and weak, like the singer was just saying the words instead of belting them out.

Besides for that, it's a pretty tight song.

Here's my latest song (it's an instrumental) Major Problem (Minor Solution). My signature has a link to my other songs as well. I'd love to hear your opinion.