#1
Everything I struggle with, is everything I see
Trying to close this unknown distance,
so you can get to me.
I can't abide this conformity,
that you expect from me,
It’s breaking me apart inside,
It was never meant for me.

I never wanted the simple life
I never wanted simple things
Maybe that’s why I’m so in love
with a girl that don’t love me
Maybe that’s why I can’t seem to break
these chains that bind me

It can only come from me,
this shallow simple compliment that you will never see.
Just take my heart in your hand
Let’s both just try to breath
forget about this mixed up life,
someone else has made for me

Chorus
The dope in his pocket
The anger on his sleeve,
A pistol stashed right by his heart,
A full magazine,
All reminding him of better times,
when that shit he did not need


Any suggestions would be helpful, I'm pretty new at this.
#2
If you are new to this then really you are done a great work! Each lines and chorus is simply marvelous. It gave me some feelings. Well done!!
#3
Quote by lesliemartindal
If you are new to this then really you are done a great work! Each lines and chorus is simply marvelous. It gave me some feelings. Well done!!


Thank you, That means quite a bit to me and my confidence. Maybe someday I'll be able to play it without getting choked up