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captivated
by the complex observated and vaccinated.
chemicals concentrated.
its written in blood, I guess I'm obligated

in a glass box
look down
isolated
can't find it but I get the sh*ts more than complicated.
find the truth, the bluecoats all frustrated
Full house, I've just not played it
watching the pendulum swing
while you're all intoxicated


aches and pain the same mistakes
can't pull it together.....and f*** this angst
weakness exposed but I pull the weight
eye on the prize but no operation in place.
Then I rise up and bathe is my strengths!

back in this same sh*t I hate!
I guess I'm just overly captivated....now get back in place!
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Last edited by ILoveGuitar07 at Sep 22, 2014,
#2
Your lyrics is good you are bit improved then the last. Interesting lines, really you have done a great job. Now I am bit inspired from you, thought of writing something new
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Quote by lesliemartindal
Your lyrics is good you are bit improved then the last. Interesting lines, really you have done a great job. Now I am bit inspired from you, thought of writing something new


haha thanks...glad to get some feedback.
but something doesn't feel quite right....I might actually revise this one. (rare for me to revise)


send your peoms/lyrics/whatever my way.
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#7
i appreciate the comments but.......I really disliked this one.

some of my stuff I like the most gets the most criticism.
which is fine....I just find it strange.
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