#1
got some lyrics i just wrote in like five minutes. made them to compliment a guitar tab I was working on. Let me know what you think (not done yet)

May the mind believe what it will
As it is corrupted with the lies of the mighty
Forming destruction against one another
For the mind controls the human and their actions

The most potent disease
Was formed by mankind
A foolish mistake that was sought to gain power
Now they pay the price
For releasing unto man
The root of all evil and the structure of greed
#2
I have gone through with the lyrics more than couple of times. It is good, but in the second paragraph there is no flow between the lines. I think you can update those lines. This is my suggestion.