#2
Its got a unique sense of melody behind it, but it sounds way way waaaay too much like a Monuments song. Half the time I thought I was listening to 97% Static.
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#3
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#4
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Wow, such a constructive crit. I mean I'm lazy, that's why I nowadays rarely crit but every single post I've seen from you in this forum is completely pointless.


#5
Lol Ometh is such a hypocrite, fucking faggot
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#6
It started off pretty standard-djenty, not bad. I liked 2 with the syncopated thingie you got going. It flows kinda nicely into three, even though I would have liked more chords/the concept in 2.
4 is pretty nice, I bet it would sound 10x better recorded, stuff like that usually sounds pretty meh in guitar pro.

5 is ok I guess, not doing much. I don't like how it flows into 6, feels too sudden. Should be more fills or buildup or something. I think 7 could be better if instead of 0, it followed the chords root notes.

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