This will be a killer song with real instruments. Will be there vocals?

You have really nice stuff going on, the transitions between the heavy and the more melodic parts flow nicely. I kind of feel the song could be longer and I think it lacks a nice bridge.

lol at that breakdown. It's definitely not bad, but guitar pro's sound is completely lame at that section.

Looking forward to the finished version. Keep it up!
Thanks! Yeah there will be vocals. GP sound sucks I will put this here when it will be recorded with real instruments

That sounds like it'll be a fantastic song when you record it properly, has a real Killswitch Engage feel to it with the harmonies and the half time drumming sections. The drums were well written and complemented the guitars and rhythms very well.

I look forward to hearing this recorded fully!

If appreciate if you could check out a couple of my tracks over at https://soundcloud.com/morphitis/seeing-in-black-and-white? I'd appreciate your views

Cheers, M