#1
Okay, so, I cranked these lyrics out in like 2 minutes after having a bad conversation with someone. Figured I might as well see what others think - what the heck? Probably some of you will figure out what inspired these lyrics, if anyone read 'em. Enjoy.


Why does this hope still burn
When I know it should be dead
And Why do I lose myself
In constant thoughts of dread
These dreams keep haunting me
Knowing what I can never have
And half the time I'm happy
And the rest im going mad

There was nothing before you
And then I saw your truth
And now im left with nothing
No reason left to stand

Alone in the darkness
This torrent never stops
I'll never care to save myself
I hope that someone does
Why does this hope still burn
When I know it should be dead

There was nothing before you
And then I saw your soul
Again im left with nothing
No reason left to hope
#2
I liked it. My only complaint is the second verse. I don't know what it is, but there's something about it makes it feel not as strong as the rest of the song. Overall though, I thought it was pretty good.
Gear:

ESP EC-50
ESP FB-204

MXR '78 Custom Badass Distortion
Dunlop Crybaby
MXR EVH Phase 90
MXR Analog Chorus

"Music is the strongest form of magic." - Marilyn Manson
#3
Thanks dude, appreciate it! Yeah, I won't argue about the second verse lol. I don't write lyrics very often, dont think I'm as good at it as the actual music.