#2
Sounds very good - well recorded.

Two issues I noticed:

1. The transition between slow intro with the cymbal count-in is, I think, oddly out of time with the following

2. At 0:51 where the rhythm guitar comes in, it is too quiet for the first bar

As for the song itself, while OK, I didn't hear a hook or an original rhythm. Now where did that riff come from?